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在這25分鐘內，考生要審題、確定思路、組織語言來完成一篇獨立的命題作文，可以說，稍微浪費點時間就根本不能有效完成一篇作文。

Do not write your essay in your test book. You will receive credit only for what you write on your answer sheet.

在該段落結束的地方，作者也重復了thesisstatement的內容，但和第二段的重復保持了措辭的區(qū)別，雖然核心意思是一回事（These important changes show the value that can come from failure）。

我們在前面提到過，為了節(jié)約時間，要略過方框以外的內容，因為方框以外的內容每次考試都是一樣的，考生應該直接看方框內的作文題。

同時，語言非常地道，即使看上去很簡單的句子，反映的也是典型的美式思維。

第四段是作者的反思，就是歷史上有很多英雄的例子，但是后人根據自己的想象不停地對那些英雄事跡進行改寫，而死人是無法給自己辯解什么的，所以電影或自傳書中的英雄形象多多少少會被人為的東西剝奪光輝，這也是我們?yōu)槭裁春茈y找到一個真正英雄的原因。

Even Shakespeare himself, the writer of immortal plays and poetry cannot fit our need for a heroic figure. He created heroes but cannot qualify as one himself: we know too little about him. History will always try

下面我們介紹一篇獲得滿分的敘述形式的文章： Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.No one is contented in this world, I believe. There is always something left to desire, and the last thing longed for always seems the most necessary to happiness. Marie Corelli, A Romance of Two Worlds Assignment: Do you think that people are capable of finding happiness or are they always searching for something beyond what they have? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and example taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observation. 優(yōu)秀范文： Happiness means different things to different people. My sister is happiest when she performs onstage in a play. My best friend is happiest when he is pitching a perfect game on the baseball field. People find happiness in all sorts of ways, but that doesn't mean they stop searching for something more. Finding happiness and continuing to pursue other goals are not mutually exclusive propositions. Instead, both of these activities can work together to motivate you, as I've learned from my own experience. When I was in middle school, my favourite class was art and I was disappointed that the class period was so short and only twice a week. Although I was happy during those times, I really missed art during the rest of the week. However, knowing that art class was approaching helped motivate me to pay attention in the rest of my classes because I knew that my "reward" would soon follow. Once we were in the art room and I was immersed in painting or sculpting or drawing, I found incredible happiness in the creative process and carried this feeling with me throughout the remainder of the day, yet I wasn't fully satisfied with this small amount of exposure and I wanted more. I did appreciate the happiness I had, but at the same time I was looking something beyond that. So I begged my parents to let me take art classes after school and on the weekend, I managed to convince them I'd be happier if I could have this additional creative time. Taking more and different art classes outside of school exposed me to a variety of different techniques and media that I never had time to explore in school, like metal-working, wood-carving and print-making. I grew even more enthusiastic about the visual arts and found even more happiness than I could have imagined thanks to these additional classes. By wanting something more, I was able to find additional contentment and inspiration and I truly was happy with the results. Yet I didn't stop reaching for other goals. I really wanted to have my artwork displayed for the public, so I worked very hard for several years to develop a portfolioand I achieved my goal last year with my first solo show at a local gallery. This success gave me much happiness, and I'm already planning additional shows. Being content with my art makes me happy on a regular basis, but this doesn't keep me from wanting something more at the same time. For me, striving for additional goals adds to my happiness, so I don't see the two actions as contradictory at all. Instead, searching for something beyond what you have can help you to appreciate and enhance whatever it is that makes you truly happy. 【點評】 這個作文題問的是，人們能否尋找到快樂，或人們是否總不滿足于眼前的快樂？ 在第一段，作者首先說明對不同的人來說，快樂意味著不同的內容，人們可以找到快樂，但不會就此停止。

還有個比較嚴重的情況，要引起我們的重視。

這個例子可以是小說里的一個人物，歷史上的一個人物或事件，甚至是報紙里報道過的一些人物或事件，也可以是自己親身經歷過的事情等等。

The thing that most people are guilty of is asking a question and expecting a specific response. For example, if I wrote this paper and asked my teacher if it was any good, I might expect her to say yes. Not necessarily because it really is a good paper, but because I don't want to get my feelings hurt if she tells me no. Why, then, do people ask these questions? To receive some sort of encouragement, regardless of whether it is an honest response or not.

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最后，從滿分作文中的例子的內容來看，涉及人文、歷史、文學和科學等方方面面的內容，這些作者充分展示了自己廣泛的閱讀量，對不同領域的涉獵，這無疑都會給閱卷者留下深刻的印象。

在把自己的觀點表明后，接下來就該要舉例來證明自己的觀點了，這個例子可以放在正文里來詳細說明，但在第一段還是最好提到下面即將要舉的例子，這可以說是全文的thesis statement。

兩個閱卷者互相之間可能并不認識，也不知道要對同一篇作文打分，更不知道考生的個人資料。

對于一個SAT作文題，如果你能夠講一個很有說服力的故事，即使不使用第三節(jié)介紹的套路，而使用純粹敘述形式（narrative）的寫作方式，也不失為一種有效的寫作。

My sister is a contrast to Jewel's effective combination of talent and motivation. When she was little, my sister showed natural talent as a dancer, and my parents enrolled her in classes to develop her talent. My sister, however, didn't care about dancing, so she never practiced or put any effort into her classes. Eventually, my parents realized that they were wasting their money to pay for the training because even though she had talent, my sister's lack of will meant

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