課程標(biāo)題：昆明青年路學(xué)托福的學(xué)校

昆明青年路托福是昆明青年路托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校的重點(diǎn)專(zhuān)業(yè)，昆明市知名的托福培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)，教育培訓(xùn)知名品牌，昆明青年路托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校師資力量雄厚，全國(guó)各大城市均設(shè)有分校，學(xué)校歡迎你的加入。

昆明青年路托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校分布昆明市五華區(qū),盤(pán)龍區(qū),官渡區(qū),西山區(qū),東川區(qū),呈貢區(qū),青年路,華爾頓大廈,東風(fēng)廣場(chǎng),南屏街,安寧市,晉寧縣,富民縣,宜良縣,石林彝族自治縣,嵩明縣,祿勸彝族苗族自治縣,尋甸回族彝族自治縣等地,是昆明市極具影響力的托福培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)。

Pop singer Jewel has a critically acclaimed voice and songwriting skills. She's won awards for her songs and succeeded in the music business. Yet she didn't achieve fame and fortune simply with her talent. Insstead, she struggled and worked incredibly hard for many years before she ever found success. In fact, at one point she was living in her car because she didn't have enough money to support herself, but she never gave up or stopped believing in her dream to play guitar and sing. Jewel's strong motivation and drive finally paid off when she was "discovered" by a music producer and her recorded albums showed off her talent and sold well to the general public, making her a successful expert in her field.

在造句時(shí), 較高級(jí)詞匯 如能運(yùn)用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個(gè)，也會(huì)使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。

二、結(jié)構(gòu)造句 與眾不同

在造句時(shí),既要使句子生動(dòng)，又要使其簡(jiǎn)明扼要。

1、使用與人不同的表達(dá)方式，特別是提倡打破漢語(yǔ)句子結(jié)構(gòu)的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世紀(jì)八十年代發(fā)生過(guò)一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多數(shù)同學(xué)使用了there be結(jié)構(gòu)，這是對(duì)的，但是B句卻摒棄了常見(jiàn)句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了 主語(yǔ) 謂語(yǔ) 賓語(yǔ) 結(jié)構(gòu)，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。

2)你八月十五日的來(lái)信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.

2.使用一些強(qiáng)勢(shì)句式，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)句的表現(xiàn)力。如：

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.

4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長(zhǎng)勢(shì)喜人很是高興。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.

3、句式多樣,復(fù)雜得體。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)避免使用相同長(zhǎng)度的相同句型，而應(yīng)注意句式的變化，如長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句與復(fù)合句共用，還可使用簡(jiǎn)化句等;一些較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨(dú)立主格，分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。下面的表達(dá)中A句簡(jiǎn)單句多，而且多處使用 there be結(jié)構(gòu)，顯得單調(diào)、乏味，而B(niǎo)句就有自己的特色。

5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房;臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。

A: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: It\'s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局謀篇 獨(dú)具匠心

在寫(xiě)作中，我們可按時(shí)間、空間或其它邏輯順序來(lái)安排各要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)為使主題突出,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，我們應(yīng)注意學(xué)習(xí)和使用交代句以及段落的主題句等。在布局謀篇上，NMET2002范文堪稱(chēng)典范。請(qǐng)看：

Opinions are divided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

但許多同學(xué)上來(lái)就立即回答問(wèn)題，如有的考生對(duì)該題目會(huì)這樣開(kāi)始：I think that we can learn something valuable from something unsuccessful。

I am more and more convinced that our happiness or unhappiness depends far more on the way we meet the events of life, than on the nature of those events themselves

　　Neapolitan designer Fausto Sarli on Saturday dedicated the jewel of his collection -- a pinkish gown studded with crystals and lavish swirls -- to U.S. First Lady Michelle Obama, saying it represented a light in the desert.

（范文二，“我妹妹”有天分不珍惜等于沒(méi)天分；范文六，我去幫助老人反而被改變?nèi)松�觀；

20. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

這里，顯然是comic books被收藏，那只能用they或their來(lái)指代了。據(jù)此，先排除A、B、C，因?yàn)檫@三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中的it或its在句中找不到指代對(duì)象。

評(píng)判英雄的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

以前，美國(guó)的老師和ETS經(jīng)常就舊SAT試題中的analogy部分及文法部分爭(zhēng)執(zhí)不休，有時(shí)候甚至對(duì)簿公堂，主要原因就在于，美國(guó)絕大部分人都能接受的文法規(guī)則ETS卻不認(rèn)可。當(dāng)然為了避免麻煩，ETS在最近幾年的試題上，已經(jīng)很少會(huì)考到一些有爭(zhēng)論的文法點(diǎn)了。

建議考生對(duì)本書(shū)的所有例題，不要急著看答案和分析，應(yīng)該先嘗試自己分析，然后和本書(shū)的分析對(duì)照，看看思路是否一致。這樣，考生可以逐漸培養(yǎng)做題思路，掌握做題技巧，從而提高應(yīng)考時(shí)候的實(shí)戰(zhàn)能力。

Let's consider Julius Caesar, a hero in his own time but regarded, thanks mainly to Shakespeare's play, as a man with mortal failings: vain, superstitious and arrogant. He can no longer be thought of as a hero, but just a man who came to prominence for his actions at a certain point in history. He has his place in the history of the Western world and his face on ancient coins, but scarcely fits our need for a hero for all times whom we can revere.

is generally free of most errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics

(C)instead of one on holding two tastings per year and to increase

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below:

In socialist China, employers should make the best use of their talents and make the best use of them.

昆明青年路托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校成就你的夢(mèng)想之旅。學(xué)托福就來(lái)昆明青年路托福培訓(xùn)學(xué)校